Short Poems Haiku

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By Mark Bronze

Best haikus

Succinct short haikus

Poetry is part of our lives and I particularly like short poems like haiku which are the shortest of all poems. We all remember snatches of poems we were taught in school, even if we cannot remember the poem title, who wrote it or how long it was. Reading poetry books is essential to understand the different styles and types of poems that can be written. Short poems are more difficult to write because you must convey so much (with few words) but this is the beauty of short poetry as it allows the reader to read between the lines. Poetry stimulates the mind and improves understanding in much the same way as reading books. Quite often when I read new poetry I have to consult a dictionary to decipher the poets meaning. I like to write poetry that is succinct and to the point and I find that the haiku is the best way to do it.

Books: short haiku poems

Illustrated Basho Haiku Poems (Little eBook Classics)
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Haiku inspiration

Loneliness haiku poem
Loneliness haiku poem

Loneliness haiku poem

My short haiku poem

I wrote the poem ‘Loneliness’ many years ago as a haiku long before I knew how to write poetry. Then I was experimenting with the balance required between the few syllables (17) allowed and trying to make some sense of the verse.

Loneliness can be

Surrounded by people who

Fail to comprehend.

When this poem is broken down to its constituent parts you will find only the 17 syllables as line 1 will have five, line 2 will have seven and the final line will again have five syllables.

How to write short poems - Haiku example

Haiku are really short poems consisting of only 17 syllables (or fewer) for the entire poem! In English it is written on 3 lines. Even when there are so few words in the poems the poet can convey a feeling of time, space, energy and other abstract thoughts. A Haiku International Association exists, so popular did these short poems become outside of Japan. An international online haiku magazine is also in existence and would be worth a visit for anyone interested in writing (or reading) haiku.

Japanese haiku poems

The Japanese Haiku
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The Sound of Water: Haiku by Basho, Buson, Issa, and Other Poets (Shambhala Centaur Editions)
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Japanese Haiku: Its Essential Nature, History, and Possibilities in English
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Haiku samples

Haiku sample short poetry


Stillness (2 syllables)
a chestnut leaf sinks (5 syllables)
through the clear water (5 syllables)

The above haiku was written in Japanese in the 17th century and shows how difficult it is to translate to English whilst maintaining the 5,7,5 syllable formula and also keeping the meaning of the poem intact as it was intended. When a haiku is written in one language it does not lend itself to easy translation to other languages.

Remembering your poem

Like dreaming and then capturing your dreams and thoughts upon wakening, the fact is that you will get some poem thoughts and ideas at the strangest times so be prepared to carry pen and paper with you wherever you go in case of inspiration. Consider this image I had of a zebra crossing which I converted to a haiku.

A big striped zebra = 5

is crossing the motorway = 7

But no one will stop = 5

Birthday poem as a short love haiku

Birthday phrases can be a short love haiku

Birthday haiku poems can be written inside Birthday cards in order to personalize them with Birthday phrases. As Birthdays are loving occasions a love haiku will be much appreciated and is just as easy to write as any other short message. These simple short poems can be a very effective way to express your feelings.

Haiku outside Japan

Zen philosophy and haiku entered the U.S. in the 1940s post the second World War. In America many Haiku journals were launched by poets in different areas including Boston, GeorgiaNorth Carolina, North America itself and Canada too. An Australian Haiku association was sponsored by Japan Airlines which boosted knowledge about Japan and Haiku philosophy in Queensland and Brisbane. In Great Britain the British Haiku Society (BHS) began in 1990 and is linked to many haiku societies across the world. The BHS publish new writing and are keen to develop the teaching of haiku in schools and colleges in the UK. India has had much less success in introducing the haiku but slow progress is being made nonetheless with some language difficulties being addressed and overcome. Hindi is the official language of India but there are another 15 or more languages recognized officially so translating short poems and haiku presents major difficulties in India.

Teaching haiku poems

Haiku Writing Lessons

Short Comments as befits the Haiku

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Kavita Trivedi 22 months ago

I love Haiku poems they are so vivid and full of imagination in those few syllables

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 22 months ago

Thank you for your kind comments. I love all poetry but short poems, haiku or otherwise, are my particular favorites. I read most of your poems, they are excellent and I wish I could write poetry as well as you do.

kim 20 months ago

wow the haiku is great no! i love it!!!!

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 20 months ago

Thank you, Kim, for your comments. I hope to do another hub on short poems soon.

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maven101 Level 5 Commenter 19 months ago

Mark..Interesting Hub on haiku...I'm drawn to haiku for a couple of reasons...One being the inherent discipline of expression required, a challenge to my free-form style...and two, the stark beauty of minimalistic expression that draws such poignant images with clarity and simplicity...

Thank you for sharing this with us...Larry

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 19 months ago

Hi Larry, thank you for your comments. Short poems allow us to say a lot with so few words and I find the Haiku to be very challenging. I did enjoy your Haiku Spring series. Excellent!

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Doug Turner Jr. Level 3 Commenter 19 months ago

As a minimalist, I'm a big fan of haikus and short poems. Thanks for your opinions, insights, and writings expressed here.

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 19 months ago

Thank you for your comments on the short poems. Its great to see poets like you joining Hubpages. I am looking forward to your next poem.

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Twilight Lawns Level 7 Commenter 17 months ago

I like your hub. It's really useful and interesting. By the way, India has two state languages: Hindi, and the secondary state language, English.

As a teacher, I was amazed at how nine to eleven year old children could write the most elegant Haiku poetry; maybe because they felt that they didn't need to rhyme; rhyming, often the death of good poetry.

My favourite, by Ezra Pound, doesn't conform to three lines nor to seventeen syllables, but is considered the quintessential Haiku because of its purity and brevity.

The apparition of these faces in a crowd

Petals on a wet, black bough

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 17 months ago

Thank you for your comments and interesting observations on the short poems and haikus of the 11 year olds. Perhaps you are right about rhyming being detrimental to good poetry and as you correctly point out: the haiku can be much shorter than the 17 syllables or even 3 lines. A nice verse by Ezra Pound too!

Poppy 15 months ago

This type of poem is new to me as I had not known haiku before. The brevity of haikus is so refreshing to me. hope to produce morw fabulous work.

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 15 months ago

Thank you for your comments These haikus are the shortest poems you are likely to find and I wish you every success in your efforts to write short poems like the haiku.

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Pearldiver 15 months ago

Interesting, I didn't know any of this when I started writing Haiku.. other than 5 - 7 - 5 format and zen principles. Haiku for me is more than anything, about the expression that really does not suit more words. We each express ourselves uniquely... finding that uniqueness is in itself the essence of life, does haiku not express this? Thanks for sharing.

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 15 months ago

Thank you for your comments. You are right in what you say about the expression of such few words Haiku style. In order to keep writing haiku I make a special effort at birthday times. Haiku for birthday is my motto, where my family is concerned and this keeps me inventive and writing new haiku which are ideally suited to greeting cards.

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anusha15 Level 3 Commenter 12 months ago

Hi, I came across the word Haiku a few days back, but all I knew was they are short poems. Your hub does a great job of not only introducing Haiku, but also explaining in appropriately required details - so that even a newbie like me is enlightened and is able to appreciate the subtle beauty of Haiku.

Since you mentioned the difficulties in introducing Haiku in India, I would like to share an old Indian proverb, which is perfect description of Haiku. Gagar mein Saagar. Gagar = Earthen Vessel (Used to keep water cool); Saagar = Ocean. Mein=in. So it means, for the context of Haiku, expressing a lot, equivalent to volume of ocean - in few words. :)

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 12 months ago

Thank you for your comments and for providing the old Indian proverb as well as taking the time and effort to describe the meaning of the words for our readers. Your old proverb is very haiku like whereby it expresses a multitude in so very few words. Even though they are short haiku poems take as much effort, if not more, to write than their longer poetic cousins.

Vivie 12 months ago

poetry broadens the mind so it is said.

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 12 months ago

Thank you for your comments on hub Haiku. I am not so sure about broadening the mind but I derive great fun from writing Birthday haiku poems for my friends and family. Haiku poems are great in my opinion.

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Rubysprings 9 months ago

Thanks the information! I've always been interested in Haikus! If you have some time check out some of my short poems!

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 9 months ago

Thank you for your comments on Haiku, the shortest of poems. I will visit your short poems soon, too as I have a preference for poetry in short verse.

L Grace 8 months ago

The shorter the better in my opinion. Poetry that is too dragged out just loses it appeal but everyone to their own I suppose. I love your work Mark, and your poetry is excellent.

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TattooKitty Level 4 Commenter 8 months ago

Great hub- very useful for those who'd like to explore the beauty of haiku! I voted up ;)

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 7 months ago

Thank you TattooKitty and L Grace for your comments on the various haiku birthday poems in this hub paying homage to short poems. The haiku style of poetry is likened to verses and rhymes for special occasions and are ideal for inclusion in blank cards where you can write your own birthday haiku poems for friends or family members. I appreciate the vote too.

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vocalcoach Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

I have been wanting to learn how to write haiku poetry. This hub explains the basics so well. I'm ready to give it a try. Love the videos. Thanks. voted up!

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 3 months ago

Thank you vocalcoach for your comments and votes on the haiku. I wish you every success with your poetry writing and if the quality of your hubs are anything to go by, you will make a fine poet. The short poems can look deceptively easy to do but are anything but.

Sylvester 5 weeks ago

This is one of the hardest forms of writing. No opportunity to get all flowery with superfluous additional words just like this. The real challenge is to convey a lot with few words.

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 4 weeks ago

Thank you Sylvester for your comments on this haiku article. You are indeed correct in what you say. Poetry writing is difficult at the best of times but in this highly shortened version you are really challenged to make every word count.

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Perspycacious Level 7 Commenter 4 weeks ago

I love this form of poetry, but my own American version of Haiku (i.e. not always bound to nature.) Thanks for this overview.

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 4 weeks ago

Hello Perspycacious, thank you for the visit to Haiku and for your comment. Poetry can be very moving and spiritual but not necessarily tied to nature. The beauty of poetry is that it is unrestricted and anyone can write a poem, just like they can write a hub.

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