How to Write Poetry and Short Poems

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By Mark Bronze

What is poetry?

Writing poems

To begin to write poems of any kind one must know how to write poetry and how poetry works and its many definitions. I begin by saying that poetry really cannot be defined properly but dictionaries do give meanings to the terms Poem, Poet and Poetry. My own definitions are as follows.

Poem

Feelings, ideas, thoughts and expressionism through language

Poet

One who creates or manipulates all of the above, sometimes in rhyme.

Poetry

The end result of merging the 2 above

When you write your poem you should read it aloud as this helps you to get the ‘feel’ of the words and allows you to chop and change the structure.

Daffodil poems

Poetic licence

Experienced poets will have a great understanding of terms like meter, versification, rhythm, stanza, feet and metaphor but if your poem sounds right to you then it is right.

Daffodil poems discussed


TO DAFFODILS.
by Robert Herrick

Fair Daffodils, we weep to see
You haste away so soon;
As yet the early-rising sun
Has not attain'd his noon.

Short poetry writing

Many short poems have been written on daffodils and in the first verse of the classic ‘Robert Herrick’ poem we see that soon and noon are rhyming words but see and sun in lines 1 and 3 are not. But the poem does have a ‘flowing quality’ to it nonetheless.


Flower poems

Fair Daffodils, we weep to see
Fair Daffodils, we weep to see

Wordsworth poems

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Famous daffodil poems

Consider this next daffodil poem by William Wordsworth and we see that the 1st and 3rd lines rhyme together with cloud and crowd (reference AA), as do the 2nd and 4th with hills and daffodils (reference BB). The final 2 lines of the verse both rhyme together with trees and breeze. (reference CC) This is known as the ABABCC rhyming scheme. The stanzas of this poem each have six-lines and are written as a couplet rhyme.

I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.

Image if you wrote the first line and it sounded like this:

‘When I wandered through the field, I was so lonely, I felt like I was a solitary cloud floating in the sky above’

This clearly is too long winded for the opening line of a poem despite the fact that it makes sense. The real skill of writing poetry, apart from idea generation, is in reducing this perfectly good starting sentence to poetic form. Wordsworth managed to reduce the sentence, whilst retaining its meaning, to just 6 words.

Love of Poetry Reading

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Understanding poetry

Iambic in poetry

Each line of Wordsworth’s poem is written and metered in iambic tetrameter which sound really complicated to me. The poem when read aloud sounds just right to me and I do not need to know what an iamb is to appreciate or write poetry. However I will try to describe the meaning. An iamb is a metrical foot consisting of 2 syllables, a short syllable followed by a long one. The ‘short’ is unstressed and the ‘long’ is stressed. Tetrameter means 4 feet. I would try to understand the second line broken into iambs and feet as follows (That floats) (on high) (o'er vales) (and hills)

The great poets

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More daffodil poetry

To an Early Daffodil

by Amy Lowell

Thou yellow trumpeter of laggard Spring!
Thou herald of rich Summer's myriad flowers!
The climbing sun with new recovered powers
Does warm thee into being, through the ring

Here in this poem the rhyming scheme is ABBA. The poem was written by Amy Lowell Who was an American poet from Massachusetts. Amy won the famous award of the Pulitzer Prize for Poetry in 1926. Her winning work was called ‘What's O'Clock’

Kids daffodil poem

Smaller Daffodil poems

There is an old English ditty or rhyme for children written about daffodils of which I know only the first 2 lines.

Daffy-down-dilly is new come to town,
With a yellow petticoat and a green gown.

Short poems can be written as Birthday poems or in the stand alone haiku format which has only 17 syllables on 3 lines and does not have to involve rhyme. See example below.

Daffodil haiku
by Mark Bronze

Daffodils of gold
The trumpeters are blowing
A heavenly sight

There are no rules on how to write poetry and everyone has a poetic licence of their own to create their own literature and poetry.

Tips for poetry writing

Poetic Comments

Carl Rollyson 2 years ago

Glad to see Amy Lowell quoted. The daffodil poem is one of her more conventional efforts. She was quite famous for her free verse. I'm writing a biography of her that is funded by the National Endowment for the Humanities. I've also published a collection of essays, Amy Lowell Among Her Contemporaries, available from amazon.com, bn.com, and iUniverse.com

poopy 2 years ago

i need to copy for my homework

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lalesu Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

Wonderful, thank you. I needed that lesson, not that I will ever be able to put it to practical use in my own writing, but I do love information and this is good info.

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 17 months ago

Thank you all for the comments you made. Apologies for not revisiting this poetry hub after writing it.

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Twilight Lawns Level 7 Commenter 16 months ago

So refreshing to read, "Poet: One who creates or manipulates all of the above, sometimes in rhyme". I would like to make it obligatory that everybody, either here, on HP or elsewhere, who attempts to write poems, is made aware that poems do not have to rhyme.

I'm tired of collections of words, all rhyming (sort of) but with no poetic sense. (Grumble! Grumble!)

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 16 months ago

Thank you for your comments. People worry, naturally, about how they are perceived by their peers. Your own writing is expressive and free flowing or perhaps even care free, if you like, and it seems that it comes easily to you. Many writers would envy your talents. As for poetry, I do believe that, occasionally, one should just throw caution to the wind and write whatever is in his, or her, head. And as for rhyming, who cares, as many great poems do not rhyme at all, but are nonetheless enjoyable.

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Twilight Lawns Level 7 Commenter 16 months ago

I love to experiment with forms and really enjoy the Sonnet form, although I find it very difficult.

On the other hand, I have a friend who insists that ALL poems must have between five and six (Yes, I know) verses and each must have four lines of iambic pentameter... He will destroy the sense, simply to force a rhyming word to the end... frequently a verb, so that he has his rhyming couplets.

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 16 months ago

Thank you once more for your comments and reply. I find sonnets too difficult to do and I steer well away from them. Your friend reminds me of certain poets insisting that 17, and only 17, syllables should be used in a Haiku. Some people are sticklers for convention but once they continue to write poetry (?) I don’t mind.

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fastfreta Level 5 Commenter 16 months ago

This is very useful. My attempts at poetry fell very short of these instructions. I'll have reread this hub when I attempt it again.

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 16 months ago

Thank you for your comments. I was trying to write poetry for years without any knowledge of the rhyming methods such as ABBA and ABABCC and so forth which I found to be helpful. My poetry is average at best but there are many great poets on Hubpages. Best of luck with your future poetry writing, I will look out for it.

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Erin Blakes 16 months ago

Great poetry writing tips you have provided. I hope my poetic attempts are up to a high standard. Look out for my poems soon. Great writing, thank you for enlightening me.

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 16 months ago

Thank you for your comments on this poetry lesson. You will find that writing short poems will be easier to begin with. Short poem writing, unfortunately, does not reflect the many hours of hard work that go into a completed poem. I look forward to your poetic endeavors in the near future.

sasikrishna 15 months ago

Really informative...keep it up...

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 15 months ago

Thank you for your comments. I believe that children should be encouraged to engage with poetry as a means of improving their vocabulary. Some of these daffodil poems for children are quite brilliant as one would expect from Lowell, Wordsworth and Herrick but kids should write their own works given this encouragement from the masters. Daffodils poems written by children themselves would be very entertaining.

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Thelma Alberts Level 6 Commenter 9 months ago

Very informative. I love the poem of Wordsworth, The Daffodil. Thanks for sharing.

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 7 months ago

Thank you for your comments on hub daffodil. This beautiful flower features such a lot in poetry and I am very fond of the great daffodil poets. I do like Wordsworth's host of golden daffodils but my all time favorite is Herrick's line 'we weep to see you haste away so soon'. I'm daft about daffs!

Sylvester 5 weeks ago

William Wordsworth was the best ever poet.

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Mark Bronze Hub Author 5 weeks ago

Thank you for your comments, Sylvester, on my how to write poems article. There are many who will agree with your sentiments regarding the great Wordsworth but there are so many brilliant wordsmiths writing today producing exceptional work. Still, he has stood the test of time.

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